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Author Name: FreeDevineangel 9 Comments
Date Added: February 23, 2007 15:02:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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SAILING





 



 



 

 

SAILING

Hear their poetic words impart
Thoughts set sail to seagulls cries
Blending emotions touching hearts
De je vu soaring through closed eyes

Distance does not a heart know
Eyes read into expressed emotion
As all sails are filled our love will grow
Tease me not my eyes are wide open

Restless souls reaching for the shore
Serene the ocean dreams tonight
Vast emotions ready to explore
His canopy of words to her recite

No wave sound misses the sand
The beach is only our bed
As passions deepen and love expands
Till now I thought these feelings were dead

Somewhere over the rainbow kisses dissolve
Forget me not written across the summer sky
Around the sun the earth still revolves
Capture my dreams in a thousand sighs

I awake and you are not there
But your words to sight remind me
It is only for you that I can care
And now everyone can see

The sails of destiny open to embrace
Two hearts beating together as one
Your beauty a sculpture of grace
Breathe deeply life has just begun

I run with the breeze till it ends
For at the moment you stand still
And my breaths suspends
A dream come alive...has become real

Love Angel & The Hobo



 
  






 

 

Author's Notes:

Thank you Ed once again it was a pleasure writing with such a talented poet. His part is in bold.
Thank you to lioness sigs for the graphics and the midi

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on November 29, 2008 05:40:43 PM Report
This is a good co-write, I like both poetic input.. Good work.
Comment By: FreeRobert Smith on May 19, 2007 03:56:31 AM Report
The Owl and the pussy cat or the Angel and Hobo! what a fine weave of wordsmithery, silken but powerful in emotion. By the way I've slept on few beaches in me time after missing the liberty boat back to Hms Newcastle, can't say I would recommend it, being woken up in the middle of my rum infused slumber with sea water shooting up my nose! - really good work here thanks for letting us share it. - Rob
Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on April 14, 2007 06:23:02 PM Report
A well written piece... entertaining, romantic with a nice flow... I enjoyed this poem...

Wishing you Well.

Sam

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 14, 2007 03:52:34 AM Report
What a wonderful combination an absolutely exquisite poem by two very talented writers, a pleasure to read.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on March 22, 2007 04:19:32 AM Report
well done both of you! It was perfused with a very real feeling of dreamy emotion and sailing ships.

Ali x

Comment By: Freetom on February 25, 2007 11:16:13 PM Report
beautiful write Angel and Hobo

handshakes and hugs kisses

tom

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on February 24, 2007 12:19:27 PM Report
A truly amazing piece of poetry, this is a very passionate co-write you both have fashioned, excellent work!!    Henry
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on February 23, 2007 04:16:33 PM Report
This is amazing........the flow is great. Beauty to the eyes and heart.

A work of art indeed...A masterpiece! You two work beautifully

together.

Hugs to you both.

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on February 23, 2007 03:53:45 PM Report
Great write you two. Blended very well together.
Helen





 


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