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Author Name: Freejohncarter 16 Comments
Date Added: March 06, 2007 14:03:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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No Door

No Door



 



My silhouette



Is trapped inside



This oubliette



Left there to forget



A dancer without



A pirouette.



 



A voice



In silent reflection



The choice



Was not my intention



But the mention of your name.



Would make me rejoice



 



In the silence



Of my emptiness.



 



 



 



 

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 3, 2007 04:24:04 PM Report
Lovely fresh presentation here John!! You have made very good use of the words you have chosen...though few they are very effectively placed. Congratualtions on the FP award.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeMichelle on May 29, 2007 12:51:29 AM Report
your poetry has a way of making the reader feel what I think you must have felt as you wrote....wonderfully done!

 

Michelle

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 20, 2007 12:48:15 PM Report
excellent writing. congrats on the award

 

Al;i x

Comment By: FreeS on April 10, 2007 02:03:33 PM Report
cool poem
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on April 8, 2007 07:45:50 AM Report

A sad situation seems to bring out the lovliest poetry. Well wriiten John. Congratulations, and happy Easter. jp


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 28, 2007 10:22:11 PM Report
John,
This door ....((

In the silence


Of my emptiness.>>. looks like a winner to me...What an award!!!
. This is heart felt...  I feel your emptyness!!! Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on March 26, 2007 02:32:27 AM Report
Oh John, how did I miss this one? Simple, yet so powerful. It really touched my soul.

LOVED IT.

Congrats on the award.

~Cindy

 

Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on March 22, 2007 07:30:42 AM Report
Dear John-
Sometimes we become trapped by the illusion we have built
as our personality offered to the world-
But who we truly are within then struggles to be freed-
Soon we begin a confliction of finding a place somewhere in the middle-
This explains why perscription "Happy" pills are now an industry and
billion dollar market-
Once again you have showed the strength of your descriptive style!
Best Wishes to You and Yours~
Peace~
James

Comment By: FreeLady Literary on March 15, 2007 03:47:19 PM Report

Nice work. Congrats on winning a much deserved featured.


Lit


Comment By: FreeAdri on March 12, 2007 01:20:09 AM Report
YAY!!!  Congratulations my dear friend on winning for this great piece!!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 11, 2007 06:58:27 PM Report
John:  congratulations on your very deserved Feature Poem Award!!

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 7, 2007 11:56:45 AM Report
Good work John, short but effective.
Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on March 7, 2007 09:07:49 AM Report
I know this all to well....loneliness is something I know so well.

Very well written dear. Excellent piece.

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 6, 2007 06:04:51 PM Report
LOnliness and the feeling of isolation couldn't be better described, John. This is some fine writing, mate..len
Comment By: FreeAdri on March 6, 2007 04:34:34 PM Report
Wow John...  this is just amazing!!!  Really love this piece.  You full this page with so much more then just words!!  Beautiful work my friend!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on March 6, 2007 02:44:02 PM Report
Excellent poem.  Really well written.

 

Antony.





 


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