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Author Name: Freebehind_blue_eyes 2 Comments
Date Added: March 12, 2007 21:03:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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There walks my angel

On our farm on the moors

Chickens and geese

You, me and the life we built together

You fell sick

I fell too

Where was the life we had built together

As you grew weak I felt my heart breaking

I knew you were no longer mine

And life in the world without you

Well

I just didn’t know how I would cope

But as you passed into the night

The day dawned when alone I rose

I walked out on the moors

Our moors

Where for the last few months you’d simply

Seen them from the window

I let the breeze blow past my face

And I knew as I looked to the heavens

Under the vastness of the blue sky

There walks my angel.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTristan on April 27, 2010 06:27:21 PM Report
A beautifully descriptive love story, both heart-breaking and soul-healing.  The word choices and flow are exceptional; the emotional tapestry is woven without a seam.  Too bad for me that you wrote it three years ago and I'm just now getting to review it for you.  I hope you are well.  Tristan
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 8, 2007 01:48:39 AM Report
Beautiful Cherie, simply beautiful! Joe




 


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