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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 5 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2007 05:03:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Inhale the smoldering sky
The Impending twilight falls
And covers everlasting plains
Drowning in this darkened pool
As if no one feels my pain

The night is breeding deep inside
Wreaking havoc on my brain
Deserted and forgotten lands
Nothing ever felt so strange

I look to a free horizon
Inhale the smouldering sky
I watch the traces of the dead
As their dreams they slowly die
 
Memories start to haunt me
This night seems to have no end
Sweat beads up as the devil in you
Begs to be my friend
 
I have got a blistering fever
I have never felt so cold
Could have worked it out somehow
Now I'm just growing old
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on March 14, 2007 05:14:36 PM Report
Mine are  hot flashes Fletch :0) I dont know who I am any more or where i am going just follow the day as it goes and returns once more. A magnificent write full of emotion brill

 

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 14, 2007 10:55:07 AM Report
Fletch:  very well done.   WOW!!!   I  know those feelings, too.  Good write.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 14, 2007 10:23:47 AM Report
I have got a blistering fever

I have never felt so cold
Could have worked it out somehow

Now I'm just growing old

 

How so well I understand this hell!! Hugs and LOve ~ She Whispers
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 14, 2007 08:30:48 AM Report
Deep, dark and brooding would sum this up for me Fletch, just excellent.
Comment By: FreeHelen on March 14, 2007 06:00:44 AM Report
Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan this poem is AMAZING. Amazing. AmAzInG!!!!! AMMMMaaaaZZZZing. If I were to quote my favorite lines I'd recite the whole poem... But instead, I'm gonna save this one to my favorites...




 


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