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Author Name: Freepenfold18 6 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2007 11:03:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Pool Of Life.
Have you dived into the pool of life?
Did it wet your appetite
Do you stand and make comparisons
Of what is wrong or right
Do you judge some now for what they are
Or what they may have been
Can you read between illicit lines
And hear the silent scream
For nobody is perfect
And secrets can run rife
But pain is pain for what it is
As sharpness to a knife.
 
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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 2, 2007 05:34:09 PM Report
The pool of life can be murky at times. Nobody should be judged by having been in it and coming out a little dirty. Judge not is one of the wisest things Jesus ever said....len

Speaking of the pool of life..Did you know that our DNA is very close to that of pond scum?..From humble beginnings, eh?...yer pal, len

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on March 21, 2007 04:50:33 AM Report

Excellent write! So true your words. Life, always changing,


nothing promised....


~Penny~


Comment By: FreeGlata on March 16, 2007 08:43:52 AM Report

Graham, this is sooo good! I think that there are very few people in the world anymore that care enough to read between the lines to see the real heart of a person...


Great work, my friend!


Hugs...Glata


Comment By: FreeAngel on March 15, 2007 03:19:11 AM Report
Oh yes how true this is. Wonderful

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 15, 2007 12:51:13 AM Report
But pain is pain for what it is

As sharpness to a knife.

You explain this poem so well.
HUgs and Love ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMichael on March 14, 2007 01:56:51 PM Report
"But pain is pain......." Very sharp, indeed (please excuse pun)! Be well, Michael




 


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