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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 4 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2007 12:03:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Unseen Rain -- Calender
Not a cloud in the sky
but it's still raining...
 
Ongoing rain the weather man does deny
but it's still raining...
 
People pass me by carefree and dry
but it's still raining...
 
The sun's so bright in the sky
but it's still raining...
 
A rain's chill felt by only one,
a rain's roar heard only by one,
a rain's wetness felt only by one...
 
The drops that fall from the journey not taken by me
Falling drops are the tears that fall within so harshly
They soak my soul with rivers of restless misery
 
That day she lay before me openly
on bed and left herself so open to see
wanting for my caress so lovingly
desiring the feel of me so caringly
 
My heart wanted to take that journey
My mind wouldn't let it be sadly
Time passed on but I haven't forgetton hardly
 
To let that chance of love get away from me
must I live on being lonely
 
Or drown with this sorrow finally...
Author's Notes:

A sacrifice made for love...

 

March 14, 2007

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on March 15, 2007 10:59:06 AM Report
You know Joe at this point you have nothing to lose. Go tell her how you feel if she walks away then you know and have lost nothing if she responds positively then you've gained a second chance. What is never said is usualy what hurts the most.
Helen

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 14, 2007 02:46:17 PM Report
LTK~
Hmmm, I do like this! Makes me want to cover you with an umbrella
and protect you from that "unseen rain"...
Good write!!
AS~
Tracie~

Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on March 14, 2007 01:13:30 PM Report
If she only knew the sacrifice that was made for her your story would have a completely different ending. 

Why the secrecy?  If you both loved each other....what could have kept you apart?

Patty

Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on March 14, 2007 01:10:54 PM Report

This is excellent, and maybe not to late, but first we have to ask ourselves why


we didn't take the chance in the first place.






 


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