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Author Name: Freewritelady 8 Comments
Date Added: March 17, 2007 10:03:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sky Opening
Sky opening,
decimation of clouds;
parting way for life again.
For a spring, a new start.

Streaks of sun,
forcing their way
through the portals of sky,
and the excitment builds.

Life calls;
the accuity of direction
as they all beckon.

Years of  a gloomy drought
coming to finale,
Opportunities knocking,
which door to open?

Urgings to open them all,
a sampling after the parchment;
so glorious to finally be drenched,
so greatful to drink again.

The exquisite freedom,
the light heartedness of it all;
a haphazard bliss,
once again,
to bloom.
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Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on September 4, 2007 02:58:50 PM Report
Just today, Barbie, I left a comment on something saying that they should have used 'portal of sky' rather than 'portal to the sky', and then I come to catch up on your page and I see this. This is good stuff, especially that opening. A couple of spellings to correct (excitement, grateful), but beyond that, this is, like most of your other free verse, a pleasure.
Congratulations by the way, the missus told me of your newly-earned qualifications.

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 2, 2007 06:27:54 PM Report
What a great light-hearted feeling to this, Barb..Yeah, even the darkest clouds have to pass, sooner or later....Wonderful poem of hope and renewal, kid...Love ya...len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 28, 2007 07:37:50 PM Report
I really like this Barbie, spring is sprung and you are writing again! Joe
Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on March 23, 2007 05:51:28 PM Report

Entertaining with a positive beat...enjoyed the read...


Comment By: FreeAngel on March 18, 2007 03:24:28 PM Report
My heart is so happy that pastures new are out there fotr you. New horizons I feel are about to happen for you. Its a journey to a brighter life........much love always


Keep in touch b i miss ya loads

Comment By: FreeGlata on March 17, 2007 12:13:39 PM Report
Beautiful work, sis....I love your freeverse writes...You express  so beautifully. comes from having a beautiful heart...

Love you gal...


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 17, 2007 10:43:36 AM Report
Well you certainly pulled out the exquisite words for this lovely write for Spring!!!  Beautiful picture in words......


Lady D

Comment By: FreeAdri on March 17, 2007 10:21:16 AM Report
Oh BB, just too beautiful!!!  I love the way it flows.  Exquisite writing! 
Adri x


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