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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 4 Comments
Date Added: May 10, 2007 15:05:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Spinning Wheel
In this time of needs and dreams
Days are like a spinning wheel
Life moves quickly so it seems
Can't find anything to be real
 
People often see thru the disguise
Charades deep inside the mind
Hurt pain deseption lies
Behind a gaze inside blank eyes
 
Living on feelings overload
Empty darkness satisfied
Feelings of which seem to explode
Greed anger lust and pride
 
Save use from our moral souls
In the end it's fear
Spinning in a world out of control
We fear the end is near
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Comment By: FreeAngel on May 24, 2007 03:57:05 AM Report
Its like one of those Catherine wheels on a firework parts of it are so beautiful then it seems to die of its sparks and another has to be started...life is so Fletch a never ending wheel round and round we go

 

Hugs

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on May 14, 2007 06:47:44 AM Report
This just shows just how crazy and irrational life can be, I love it. "Behind a gaze inside blank eyes" really caught my attention.  Its powerful, sometimes- when I get scared (like really scared) I black out, I can't see or feel, but I'm awake (so I've been told).  Its is a perfect description. 

This whole poem is beautifully written, Very Nice job Fletch!

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 11, 2007 12:58:26 AM Report
LIFE IS A TURNING CHARED WISDOM BURNT PAGE.
SOMETIMES WE ARE FILLED WITH CONSTANT UNCONTROLLED RAGE..

 I KNOW HOW YOU ALWAYS FEEL MY DEAREST FRIEND 
 SOMETIMES I JUST DON'T WANT TO START MY LIFE AGAIN

 AS I READ THIS POEM TONIGHT I  KNOW YOUR DEMONS
 YOU ALWAYS FIGHT

 FOR I HAVE FEEL THE HOT BREATH DOWN MY BACK
I TRY TO ALSO  SLEEP IN THE LONG NIGHT 

 LOVE AND HUGS ~SHE WHISPERS

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 10, 2007 03:44:59 PM Report
It's a crazy world we live in...and sometimes we do find ourselves spinning in circles so fast that we can't stop. Quite an interesting write, hon...

Hugs and love to you and yours!

Glata





 


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