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Author Name: Freequeens1 8 Comments
Date Added: March 19, 2007 19:03:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Moon and the Sun-Villonnet

The Moon and the Sun

The bold full moon rises in the east at sunset.
Her face can clearly be seen over the roof tops,
As the sun takes his curtain call and says goodnight.
Though I welcome the moon, I shall miss the sun yet.
 
The best moonrises happen, safe for you to bet,
At both the vernal and autumnal equinox
When the moonrise and sunset occur together.
The bold full moon rises in the east at sunset.
 
For all its beauty, the moon is in the sunís debt.
Even when clouds obscure the rising of the moon,
The sun paints the clouds with brilliant streaks of color.
Though I welcome the moon, I shall miss the sun yet.
 
The bold full moon rises in the east at sunset,
The wondrous Moon Goddess in all of her splendor.
Though I welcome the moon, I shall miss the sun yet.
Author's Notes:
Contradictory as it may seem, I am a night-owl who loves to watch the sunrise.  This form is a Villonnet.  It is a hybrid of the Villanelle and the Sonnet.  I used the French form of the sonnet with 12 syllables per line.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMISS_VEE on October 15, 2008 05:14:41 AM Report
Congratulations on the Featured award this poem is great. I too like to watch the sunrise!!!!!

 

VEE XXX

Comment By: FreeSteve on October 14, 2008 04:53:27 PM Report
Well done and Congratulations !
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 14, 2008 06:10:32 AM Report
Beautiful write and I loved the styles and form...
Excellent! Congratulations...
~Tracie

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 13, 2008 07:05:35 AM Report
...and it turned out beautiful! Congrats, Joe
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 12, 2008 09:04:50 PM Report
Super Congratulations on this Feature Poem Award.  An excellent write and use of poetry styles.  Keep up the great writes.

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on March 20, 2007 09:35:57 AM Report
Very nice, I like!
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 20, 2007 07:30:28 AM Report
Very nice work! I love the nights...and have grown to be more of a night person as I get older. Mornings are strictly for the birds! LOL. That might be because the kids are always bickering as they get ready for school, though....I might  grow to like mornings a bit better when the kids aren't fighting so much. Morning grouches make the mornings not so desirable!

Great job...

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 20, 2007 12:41:15 AM Report
Nothing makes me sleepier than seeing the sunrise..:O)..Not only a beautiful poem, but informative as well..len




 


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