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Author Name: FreeTrue 2 Comments
Date Added: March 20, 2007 15:03:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~ Breathe ~
Don't Breathe! Don't Breathe!
Hold it in as long as you can
Or your next breath might be your demise.
Trapped under the gaze of the frigid ice,
You stare hopelessly at the mountain top you'll never reach.
Kicking and pounding, floating helplessly
Below the frozen surface,
You fight until your hands bleed
And the pulse beating through your ears deafens you.
Thump Thump! Thump Thump!
It sounds louder in your head as your eyes get wide with fear.
Your fists stop pounding and your feet stop struggling
As you slowly begin delve into the depths of the ocean
You slowly lose conscience and your eyes turn up toward the ice
Giving you one last blurry glance of red and blue bubbles
The only thing remaining of your last breath
 
 
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This was another assignment for school
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRin Marie on May 14, 2007 04:35:09 PM Report
Wow, you put my fear of falling through ice at a whole new level for me.  yikes. lol

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeIsaac on March 20, 2007 06:46:52 PM Report
"Your fists stop pounding and your feet stop struggling." My favorite
line, I dunno.. But the whole thing was really great anyway.






 


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