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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 2 Comments
Date Added: March 20, 2007 18:03:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Love's Epic Journey -- Synchronicity
 Silent wandering about 
 here and there searching for hope 
 he does. 
 
 Vigilantly seeking love 
 like no other has before 
 in life. 
 
 Through storms of terse emotion, 
 his vision does not waver 
 at all. 
 
 Envious creatures of night 
 do pursue at desperate length  
 for him. 
 
 His heart held strong by strong hope 
 that nothing will sway him from 
 his goal. 
 
 Try as they may the light shines 
 so bright, illumination so 
 stunning. 
 
  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 
 
 With a sigh his love adjusts 
 the light so he can see clear 
 it's her. 
 
 He wandered around the room 
 He was glad he found her to 
 embrace. 
Author's Notes:
My first attempt at the Synchronicity form, I tried to followed the requirements as closely as I could in this self-challenge.  Let me know what you think, okay?
 
"Synchronicity" (The state or fact of being synchronous or simultaneous; synchronism. 
Coincidence of events that seem to be meaningfully related.). This form consists of
eight three-line stanzas in a syllable pattern of 8/8/2.  This poetry type has no rhyme
and is written in the first person with a twist. The twist is to be revealed within the last
two stanzas.  Created by Debra Gundy.
In the poem, a guy searches for his wife in a dark bedroom but is plagued by tricks of night's shadows.  She turns on the light but has to adjust the brightness in order for him to see her.  He thinks he 'found' her but she knows differently.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 23, 2007 07:48:00 AM Report
Beautiful work, Joe...and an even more beautiful content.

Awesome! You take on these new style challenges so well!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 21, 2007 06:46:57 AM Report
Joe
Wow.. this is really very good..outstanding in fact...I need to play catch up with your poems bare with me OK?? I work so much... Hugs ~She Whispers





 


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