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Author Name: Freequeens1 4 Comments
Date Added: March 23, 2007 08:03:01 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Falling Blindly

Falling Blindly

I remember falling blindly
And you treating me so kindly,
Working together faithfully,
Playing together blissfully.
 
Our day trips pleasing happily,
Riding in your car merrily,
Stopping wherever thoughtfully,
Playing together blissfully.
 
But I ran away, foolishly
In all my pride so selfishly.
You welcomed me back gracefully,
Playing together blissfully.
 
I remember falling blindly,
Playing together blissfully.
Author's Notes:
When people love you, they will forgive anything.  This is a beautiful thing, that should not be taken lightly.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 25, 2007 04:57:42 PM Report
Love-a-ly...You set yourself a real task in ending every line with "ly"...Nice job, kid...:O)..len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 23, 2007 04:33:14 PM Report
Absolutely! Nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on March 23, 2007 11:51:19 AM Report
Truly beautiful and moving, wonderful contribution to the calender! :o)
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 23, 2007 09:53:00 AM Report
The "about" on  this is the most true statement ever said. What hurts is when you love someone enough to forgive them over and over and they keep hurting you over and over. Still yet, that love, if it's a true love, will demand that the pains be forgiven.  Look at children...no matter how many times they fight with their friends and playmates, they will forgive one another and will be best friends again within minutes...and children love their parents no matter what. I have noticed children that are abused usually tend to lie to protect the abusive parent...because they crave their love so much that they are willing to forgive even the horrible abuse...just to have the love  that they so deserve.

Love is a forgiving, caring and trusting creation, given to us from the Creator, therefore it is a  miracle to be shared  and enjoyed.

Great write, Patty!

Hugs!

Glata





 


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