When by john carter

		Author Name: johncarter	1 Comments
		Date Added: March 31, 2007 10:03:11	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When

When the day has ended

And night rushes in

When I fear the most

And you are just a ghost within.

When the night birds are calling

Echoing loud

When I just want to be alone

A single voice

Seems like a crowd.

When the dark shadows fall

Loneliness is all

That's when I wish you where here.

When all I can see

Is the judgement of me

That's when I wish you where here.

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	Comment By: She Whispers on March 31, 2007 11:01:53 AM	Report
	John, Sadness is a heavy cloak that weighs us down... the past sometimes haunts with a pain that is so hard to understand or know how to handle.. How so well I understand this painful poem.. Love is a creature thats stalks even though we know there is no escape...some times just a bit of love is better than no love.. Thank you for your comments .. Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment