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Author Name: Freejohncarter 1 Comments
Date Added: March 31, 2007 10:03:11 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When

When



 



When the day has ended



And night rushes in



When I fear the most



And you are just a ghost within.



When the night birds are calling



Echoing loud



When I just want to be alone



A single voice



Seems like a crowd.



When the dark shadows fall



Loneliness is all



That's when I wish you where here.



 



When all I can see



Is the judgement of me



That's when I wish you where here.

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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 31, 2007 11:01:53 AM Report
John,
Sadness is a heavy cloak that weighs us down... the past sometimes haunts with a pain that is so hard to understand or know how to handle.. How so well I understand this painful poem.. Love is a creature thats stalks even though we know there is no escape...some times just a bit of love is better than no love.. Thank you for your comments ..
Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers





 


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