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Author Name: Freejohncarter 8 Comments
Date Added: April 15, 2007 09:04:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mr Lonely

Mr Lonely



 



You have held my hand



So many times



Inside I know you understand



For I am you



You are me



Thatís how my life



Was meant to be?



Independence or dependence



Is a lonely drug



And is a jug



That I have drank from



In my resplendence.



So, Mr lonely



Is my life only?



A breath between



Heartbreak and happiness



Or could I



Be re-born



In the ever longing sadness of your eyes.



 



 



 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 7, 2007 08:55:58 AM Report
Beautiful, loneliness can be felt in a room of many people. Sometimes it feels more comfortable to be alone in your own thoughts

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAdri on July 1, 2007 04:33:45 PM Report

This is so real, and I know the feeling in this, I feel it...  Brilliant work here my friend. you really captured it here.  I love it. 
Love
Adri x


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 28, 2007 10:30:48 AM Report
aye its a question alright.......nicely put

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 21, 2007 04:10:33 AM Report
An excellent write John though very sad , I hope its just a poem and not personal to yourself.
Comment By: PremiumGlata on April 16, 2007 02:50:15 PM Report
Wow, John...A sad and compelling write that urges the reader to reach out and give you a hug. Life's a great place to be, but at times, it certainly can be lonely.

Great work!

Glata

Comment By: FreeCHRISSY on April 15, 2007 10:52:17 AM Report
Beautiful write.  I question this all time time.

Can someone bring me happiness..and let lonely exit out of my heart...

Wonderful.

Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on April 15, 2007 10:12:01 AM Report
Filled with so much listless hope, and wishes for that in-between.  That breath that lives between night and daybreak, on the edge of departing and arrival. Ahhh. Bliss be had here in this euphoric state.  I loved this piece. Wonderful words penned here filled with emotion. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 15, 2007 09:37:25 AM Report
John,
Wow.. a very moving poem.. it tugs at the heart to read this kind of lonely..the words make one think.. can someone bring you happiness..with longing saddness of her eyes.. beautiful... Who Knows Maybe..
hugs and love ~She Whispers





 


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