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Author Name: FreeLastTempleKnight 4 Comments
Date Added: April 18, 2007 12:04:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I thought I could trust you -- Fiction
I thought I could trust you
To keep safe my confidence
To never reveal my secrets
To be a true friend always
 
"I thought I could trust you..."
 
Out of everyone I know
I thought I could trust you
No matter what may come
With you I felt it secure
 
"I thought I could trust you..."
 
Sold out to those who care less
Those who I never trust; at least
I thought I could trust you
My heart cut sharply & deeply
 
"I thought I could trust you..."
 
I'm not sure of anything anymore
I question all of those around me
A lifetime of faith broken because
I thought I could trust you
Author's Notes:

A fictional poem about a trust betrayed; this has nothing to do with my personal life.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 21, 2007 12:45:23 AM Report
You fooled me, Joe..I was expecting a story...A fine poem..The repitition works...len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 19, 2007 12:33:09 AM Report
Trust is a blessing some abuse this feeling how well I understand.... hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on April 18, 2007 01:09:29 PM Report
There is nothing worst than a trust betrayed.  It will be infinitely harder to trust again, but it can be done and be worth the risks.

Patty

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 18, 2007 01:04:12 PM Report
My friend, I'm glad you specified that this was a fictional work because I was getting ready to rip someone a new one! Faith and trust are hard earned and harder given...and I don't understand how people can so easily toss that aside...

A fantastic reminder to always hold tight to the confidences that others trust you with....

Hugs!

Glata





 


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