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Author Name: Freejohncarter 12 Comments
Date Added: April 22, 2007 10:04:46 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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For You

For You


 


I would give my last breath


To keep yours alive.


I would fight any fire


So you could survive.


I would sell my soul


For the price of your kiss.


For my heart


Has stopped beating


In this lonely abyss.


 


 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on October 8, 2007 03:34:26 PM Report
Such a beautiful tender poem.

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 23, 2007 01:09:38 AM Report
How very sad John. It hurts to read this. Your need is very evident here-your heart is wide open.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeStrongerNow on July 14, 2007 09:43:17 AM Report

Wow! Very well penned. Hope she knows how lucky she is.


Lisa


Comment By: FreeStrongerNow on July 14, 2007 09:43:07 AM Report
Wow! Very well penned. Hope she knows how lucky she is.
Comment By: FreeAdri on July 1, 2007 04:43:22 PM Report
There is only one way to love...  With all; body, hear and soul.  This is breathtaking.  I echo your words here. 
Love

Adri x

Comment By: FreeWhiteOwl on May 26, 2007 12:38:14 AM Report
Wow, I enjoyed well done
Comment By: FreeT. S. Hulse on May 5, 2007 03:18:52 PM Report
Short and sweet. Gets the message across perfectly. Great job!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 2, 2007 12:41:32 PM Report
Love is not love unless its worth dying for...

Ali x

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on May 2, 2007 01:07:02 AM Report
Wow John...with love like this who needs anything else.

Helen

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 1, 2007 03:52:55 PM Report
Powerful message, John...Unless a person loves another enough to die for, I don't think it's a life, fulfiled..Maybe yer soul for a kiss is a bit steep, though..:O)..len
Comment By: PremiumGlata on April 27, 2007 09:08:56 AM Report
Such a revealing of your heart, willing to do all to protect the one you love. Beautifully done, with an ending that pleads for understanding.  Great job, John.

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 23, 2007 08:00:54 AM Report
John,

 LOvely poem to her ..you have expressed with such a tender heart...(

For my heart


Has stopped beating


In this lonely abyss.


 


 Such love you have for her.. Your awesome writer my dear friend..Hugs ~She Whispers






 


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