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Author Name: FreeJoyfulSilence 14 Comments
Date Added: April 29, 2007 16:04:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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*~She Dances to a Silent Song~*

There are questions she wonít answer-

There are ones, she will not ask.

She stands, as a lone dancer-

Her tears hidden Ďneath her mask.

Movementís graceful, body brilliant,

Eyes are drawn to such a sight.

Tears held in, with such resilience-

Yet alone she screams at night.

 

Feel the pressure, feel the pain,

Itís the drug in which she uses.

Feel the beauty from her strain,

Itís the eloquence she chooses.

Itís a grand-pliť of choices;

Itís the light that floods the stage,

The encouragements of voices,

Itís her deep secreted rage.

 

In an arabesque she poses,

The curtain lowers to the floor.

The crowd is throwing roses,

Applauding to see more .

She has no more left to offer-

No tendues, no pirouettes;

For her doctor says sheís dying-

Yet alive, sheís not felt yet.

 

Afraid to face her reality,

She ignored the words he said;

Ovarian cancer, in stage three-

She knows sheíll soon be dead.

She gets weaker by the day,

Ignored for almost a year-

All she ever did was pray,

But inside she shudders in fear.

 

She lies inside the hospice room-

Her beautiful body withered away,

Her family senses impending doom,

Beside her bed her loved ones stay.

Her young life, this disease has stole;

It stripped her of her poise.

Softly dances away her soul-

To the music that wonít make a noise.

 

Author's Notes:
Though I have lost family and friends from cancer, this is not based on my life. Just an example of what can be stolen from you at any given time at any given moment. Cherish life, you never know how long it will be so enjoyable.
 
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMoon Fairy on July 20, 2007 03:09:52 PM Report
Rin,

So very moving and heartbreaking..wonderful write
Tracie~

Comment By: FreeLeah on July 8, 2007 04:34:27 PM Report
Wow,this is an amazing poem.So true,you really are a great writer.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 5, 2007 04:07:02 PM Report
A vey moving and real poem, Rin..The universe is what it ie-Someimes cruel, sometimes kind...We have a choice in how we live-Love can be the glue that binds...len
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on May 5, 2007 10:34:20 AM Report
You paint quite a moving picture with your words Rin.... Your depiction shows what a terrible disease this is and how it can rob you of everything! This is a great piece, with great flow to it.  Henry
Comment By: FreeScarface on May 2, 2007 10:55:54 AM Report
This is an amazing piece
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 1, 2007 08:44:58 AM Report
Rin, this is just incredible! I agree with Bruce, keep going, Joe
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on April 30, 2007 02:59:31 PM Report
Enthralling poem Rin...

And the introduction of tragedy was stunning and poignant...
You executed this pirouette with breathtaking grace and eloquence~ Beautiful!

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on April 30, 2007 01:37:48 PM Report
What a brilliant write!! Your writing talent is certainly a

gift. This is just beautiful yet with a touch of sadness. Cancer is

so horrible and claims so many lives daily. I just wish there

a cure. You have done an excellent job with this write dear.

Amazing!! Touching indeed.

Hugs,

~Penny~

Comment By: Freebloodtear on April 30, 2007 12:31:33 PM Report
I am trully in awe of your talent!

i have seen cancer ravage the lives of members of my family also, and you displayed it in a circumstance that deeply demonstrates how it can steal lives away. This made my stomach churn as I read through. Excellent visuals also.

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 30, 2007 08:56:27 AM Report
Rin,
A  powerful poem which touches many lives.. it runs in my family as well I can so realte..live every day..because it all can change..in a heartbeat
~ She Whispers

Comment By: AdminRichardM on April 30, 2007 08:49:30 AM Report
A very insightful write, Rin, and one that seems so horribly accurate. One that puts us in touch with so many feelings about the disease. Well done!

Rich

Comment By: FreeRichard Michael Cronin on April 30, 2007 08:20:22 AM Report
A very well written, albeit sad story. Nice work!
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 29, 2007 05:12:29 PM Report
My mother dies from ovarian cancer the doctors neglected her and she was not given the scans she needed.... would be alive today but for their incompetense. It is a horrid disease my cousin has just found out she has breast cancer and has been having chemo.She has to have her breast removed and wants them both taken off in case it goes into the other one. Her sister found out she had uterine cancer a few years ago she is now in remission. My aunt (mums sister had throat cancer thank god it was benign. I have had cancer cells on my cervix but had them taken off. They have to keep an eye on you if it is genetic. I know how hard it is to see the ones you love wither away in front of you. My mum use to ask me am I dying my reply was no why? because once the person knows I feel they give up and without hope they are a shell from day one. Each moment is so very precious Ren

 

A beautiful heartbreaking write

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: Freetom on April 29, 2007 04:51:16 PM Report
Wonderful write Rin Marie and you so so right.

hugs kisses

tom





 


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