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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2007 07:05:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I want a girl

With long blond hair

A rabbit who thinks

Heís a hare

With a watch as big as a sundial.

A queen overbearing

A king so demure

And a cat thatís appearing

Then disappearing.

A tea party so mad

Where the hatter looks sad

An un-birthday treat

Something you can eat

A biscuit

That will make you grow.

Tweedle dumb and

Tweedle dee

Confusion is an art you see

A pack of cards

A painted rose

The colour red

Off with his head!

The queen had chosen golf

To much dismay

But the jack of hearts

Would live

To fight another day.


Author's Notes:
Co write with  Lewis Carroll
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Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 29, 2007 12:26:37 AM Report
Hee hee...I bet you guys ate a few shrooms before you wrote this, huh?...Great stuff..len
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on May 21, 2007 01:32:41 PM Report
What WIT!!! :o)

And captured it all in this poem...I cannot think of a thing left out.

Wonderful imagery...lines that me me smile fondly...Incredible ode to this Classic.
Mr.Carol would be honored I'm sure! :o)


Comment By: PremiumPamela A. Lamppa on May 20, 2007 08:26:01 AM Report
Exceptional.  This is GREAT.  I love it that you and our friend "Lewis" could quite agree so heartily.  Wonderfully creative and a real pleasure to see here on CP.  Bravo poet, Bravo! ~Pamela

Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on May 12, 2007 09:05:47 AM Report
Dear John-
I found this to be an interesting concept-
A melting of the minds of yesterday and today-
Best Wishes to You and Yours My Friend~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 12, 2007 08:48:01 AM Report
Oh, I just found this awesome poem.. you two write so well together..
Hope you two do more....Cute poem...
Always hugs ~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAimee on May 12, 2007 07:31:44 AM Report
Another wonderful read :)

Full of imagination; it almosts makes you madder than myself! (ALMOST)

Lots of love,

Aimee xxx

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on May 12, 2007 07:07:44 AM Report
And one I'm sure he would approve of given his sense of humour a wonderful play with words John.


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