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Author Name: Freequeens1 4 Comments
Date Added: May 21, 2007 19:05:12 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Tiny Droplets

Tiny Droplets

It began with a tiny trickle,
Seeping slowly through a small crevice,
Giggling over smooth pebbles that tickle,
Laughing and tumbling over a rocky expanse.
 
One raindrop ‘ploop’ onto hard granite,
Quickly joined by others to form
A long continuous ‘drip’, ‘drip’, ‘drip’.
It began with a tiny trickle.
 
Gravity tugging on each droplet,
Every joining creates a gurgle,
Pushing against the squeezing stone walls,
Seeping slowly through a small crevice.
 
Screaming down a slick mountain side,
Splashing and jumping for joy
Into a swirling, whispering pool,
Giggling over smooth pebbles that tickle.
 
Elevation changes make it stronger,
Running into spawning king salmon,
Merging enthusiastically with other streams,
Laughing and tumbling over a rocky expanse.
Author's Notes:
Taken from the April calendar about the sound a stream would make on its way to a river.  Done in the Cascade form.
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Comments:
Comment By: TrialAnn on June 10, 2007 10:56:43 PM Report
Nicely done! I can hear it and see it...:)

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 22, 2007 03:36:25 PM Report
Lovely, Pen..From a drop to a river..Nature is a wonderful gal...len
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on May 22, 2007 05:19:20 AM Report
And very effective it is, I could feel it gathering pace as I read as well as the images created,
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on May 21, 2007 07:35:15 PM Report
Very pretty picture in words.  I really enjoyed the "adventure".

 

Lady D





 


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