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Author Name: Freequeens1 3 Comments
Date Added: June 13, 2007 17:06:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Know, But....

I Know, ButÖ.

 
I know how I feel about you, but I donít know how you feel.

I know Iím too old to play games, but you have charm and appeal.

I know there are other concerns, but I love your point of view.

I know you are a busy man, but without you I feel blue.

I know we were friends once, but time has moved on and so have we.

I know life took us down different routes, but I took to the sea.

I know that I could move closer, but thatís not reality.

I know my heart is full, but thereís a void only you can fill.

I know Iím nostalgic, but that loyalty is a virtue.

I know we can try again to see what good friends we could be.

Author's Notes:
About a good friend who moved away a few years ago.  Done in the CinqTroisDecalLa Rhyme style.  It was created by Laura Lamarca, consisting of one 10-lined stanza.  The rhyme scheme is AABBCCCABC and a syllable count of each line is 15.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 21, 2007 12:42:16 PM Report
I like this style...well done.
Helen

Comment By: TrialAnn on June 14, 2007 11:47:41 PM Report
I like the innovation and the thought within the lines. Nice work.


Comment By: FreeGlata on June 14, 2007 11:41:15 AM Report
Lovely work...I like the styles that you try out.

Hugs!

glata





 


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