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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: June 26, 2007 09:06:43 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I could measure by the hour

That which love

Had left me sour

But hour by hour

Your love

I would devour

Until the shower

Had left me wasted

Wet skin black silk

This moment I have tasted.






Author's Notes:
I guess my mind is not clean enough yet lol
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Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 6, 2007 06:52:31 AM Report
I would get back under that shower if I were you and switch the button to cold lol


Ali x

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 30, 2007 05:06:55 AM Report
This I can relate to John teriffic write and a great analogy the shower.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 27, 2007 12:28:53 AM Report
Shower Power, Bro..Far out!!...len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 26, 2007 10:59:13 PM Report
John, sometimes it takes a long time to wash it off our mind and heart..  Great poem... I know some great soap that smells so good on the skin...It will wash all that nasty crap off!!
HUgs ~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCandy on June 26, 2007 09:55:46 AM Report
lol not what expected but better!! well done!!


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