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Author Name: Freeclare 9 Comments
Date Added: June 27, 2007 11:06:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A theory on something
 
Logicalities and rationalities
 
Wonít stop running through my head
 
With all these theories consuming philosophies
 
My soul is mockingly empty, and dead
 
 
 
Mathematics proves respite
 
Proves all the concepts right
 
An ironic parallel to life
 
Of a single destination
 
When the only puzzle is simply
 
Finding the correct direction
 
 
 
Numbers in my mind
 
Constantly scrutinizing life
 
Dissecting every factor
 
To if itís wrong or right
 
Analyzing what Iím feeling
 
Until Iím just not real
 
 

Logically all this legitimating is illogical

 
Although each moment I delve deeper
 
In an obligated attempt to fix myself
 
I am struck with the sense of how deep it all really goes
 
 
 
I discovered this while scrubbing incessantly
 
At a fingerprint mark on the wall
 
Only to stand back and realizeÖ
 
How dirty the rest of the wall really was
 
 

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: Freenoah count on June 2, 2008 12:01:17 PM Report
Saw this on someone's fav. list.  I see the word brilliant in most of the comments, and they're absolutely correct. 
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on July 1, 2007 10:03:31 AM Report
This was just brillianClare! The last two lines summed it up neatly, I take it to mean "Don't sweat the small stuff in life because there are bigger things to care about". Great work Clare!   Henry
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on July 1, 2007 08:00:21 AM Report
Dear Clare-
I LOVED THIS!!!
The last 2 lines really summarize mankind and to me,
the reason for our being here-
The core of existence is pure and we as a civilization are
the outer layers-
If we do not return more in tune with the unity of the core,
we may contaminate the other layers.
This "Theory" was described simply and honestly making these
words have an impact-
Best Wishes to You and Yours My Friend~
Peace~

James

Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on June 30, 2007 11:32:13 AM Report
Really well written... You're very, very talented.

 

Antony.

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on June 30, 2007 09:43:36 AM Report
This is brilliant! Its magnificently written, and it has amazing insight. I love this, I'm favoriting it.

Love, Rin
Comment By: FreeMike on June 30, 2007 12:06:09 AM Report
Very well written and great use of vocabulary. Really had to read this twice to absorb it all. Great reflection and definately, great write.

 

MIKE

Comment By: PremiumMelanie on June 28, 2007 08:12:54 AM Report
Clare,
This is very well written with so much revelation. Lessons can be learned from this.
I enjoyed it immensely.

Comment By: Freesanddancer on June 27, 2007 05:38:20 PM Report
This is a pretty deep piece of writing. Logic is cold and analytical- it gives definite answers but doesn't always provide the best way of getting there!

 

I love that last verse- sometimes we need to stand back and see the bigger picture instead of worrying about our little piece of it.

 

Nice one.

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 27, 2007 12:05:23 PM Report
Sounds like it was a Eureka! moment... :o)

Very insightful thoughts, cleverly and eloquently presented~

Excellent penning!

Pamela





 


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