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Author Name: Freeemerging 3 Comments
Date Added: July 13, 2007 13:07:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A New World
 
WB#2b For Daniel: A New World
 
A fresh breeze begins to flow in your world
It fills your heart with a strong desire
a desire to nurture this flower,
water it with clean river water 
so it would bloom in the garden of your heart
A beauty seen through your eyes alone
their greenish colour reveals
the brightness each time you see her
Sometimes it's like the wonders of a rainbow
other times as the rays of the sunshine
It's a rational decision
and I choose to perceive this feeling as possible love
as her lips taste sweeter than honey
and the warmth of her arms take me to heaven.
Author's Notes:
Same words, but used in a different context. Comments appreciated.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on July 14, 2007 09:05:00 AM Report
Dear Lisa-
This piece contains many mental images that you portraid
with elegance and a unique style-
Bravo!
Best Wishes to You and Yours My Friend~
Peace~
James

Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 14, 2007 06:55:43 AM Report
Oh yes, very nice indeed. Nice little twist to things. barbie
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 13, 2007 01:48:56 PM Report
stunning write, beautiful in every way bravo





 


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