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Date Added: July 17, 2007 08:07:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hidden Eyes~2

~Hidden Eyes~


I wonder if there are hidden eyes

Watching from the evening skies

For if there is they wouldn’t dare

Let us know they're in the air

We’ve built this world Nation to Nation

With violence as part of our foundation

While each country sits on a detonator

Wanting to be the new dominator

Children die everyday for no damn reason

Our governmental leaders border treason

If we can live every day with this mentality

Then coming here would be a catastrophe

I’m doing the best that I can to explain

Other beings would think we are insane

After placing our race under magnification

They would leave us alone in our isolation

Author's Notes:
In the sea of a galactic planetary evolvement, a solar system was born,
and a single planet among its structure began a new life form.
This unique and intricate existence became labeled as Mankind-
In the beginning they were fairly barbaric and extremely confused by the
origins that granted them life- As mankind continued to flourish and
populate the planet, some had the vision of reality among the others who
simply adhered to what they were told or heard-
These visionaries were refered to as prophets-
And the prophets stated that man was created by a force greater than 
mortals had ever known upon the planets surface-
As time continued on, Mans thirst for the truth became altered by their
self constructed versions of reality.
Yet it was predicted centuries before this would happen-
After all, it was why they were placed upon the planet in the first place-
To keep them from contaminating the unity of one-
Earth was the sanctuary constructed to house the criminally insane.
And under hidden eyes, the guardians observed from a safe distance-
For they had not discovered their origins yet and therefore must
continue to be isolated from all but their own.
Someday mankind may discover the truth of their existence through
the unity of an unsegregated race based upon spiritual factors and
no other regions such as race, culture or skin pigmentation.
That is if they do not extinguish themselves first-
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Comment By: FreeJennifer on October 13, 2008 07:06:50 PM Report
i love this poem. you always teach me so much! I look up to you


Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on October 16, 2007 08:31:24 AM Report
Excellent rhyme, loved this


Comment By: FreeWhiteOwl on August 21, 2007 12:32:23 AM Report
interesting as always my friend
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 31, 2007 08:52:02 AM Report
greatly powerful write, deservant of an award i'd say,
certain favourite

Comment By: FreeDavid on July 18, 2007 02:14:13 AM Report
i really like this, its pretty much how i feel on the subject. the only thing i may add is my opinion. we are destroying ourselves from the inside, each country, each place is. when we all know how to control this and set our differences aside, we are all the same.... human. great write


Comment By: Freenoah count on July 18, 2007 12:14:25 AM Report
Some day. 
Comment By: FreeRachel on July 17, 2007 05:29:15 PM Report
*great write*
Comment By: FreeRachel on July 17, 2007 05:28:54 PM Report
so sad but true and the truth hurts... its too bad that the ones that could do something for us all fell no pain only the hate that drives them to the disgusting things they do.


Comment By: FreeMISS_VEE on July 17, 2007 01:32:56 PM Report
Strong thoughts my friend. This sure presents the wonderful "kick up the backside" attitude that this world is in great need of.


love Vee xx

Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on July 17, 2007 01:08:13 PM Report
well written, interesting piece...wishing you well.



Comment By: FreeStrongerNow on July 17, 2007 09:33:34 AM Report
Awesome write and very true.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 17, 2007 08:52:29 AM Report

Wow ...the truth speaks out so loud!!
Powerful words that express and explain how crazy this world is today!! 

 As always I so enjoy your thinking... seems like the children suffer more than every one else..
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 17, 2007 08:49:07 AM Report
Going into my favs list James, terrific write! Joe


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