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Author Name: Freemaybememories 2 Comments
Date Added: July 18, 2007 21:07:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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chordata
Whether we win; when I'll see it: I'll say the seasons seemed to agree with
Empty seas see less; hoping in dreams with, a reason deemed to be needless
Seemingly seamless; God- a witness; hoping one day I'll be redeemed and
Breathe less; we all die its what we were diseased with; you still give me a reason
I love being this; a hopeless being but so full of it even while this test is being tested
Heart arrested; tell me if you could live apart from my caresses; touched carelessness
I've become to interested; listless to anything but your interests and sweet suggestions
Tasted your forgiveness and hate but faced it; I need to believe this love is infinite not wasted
You can never be replaced with; take me back before its to late and I debate it
This is not my own statements; I've been hit with loves kiss and doesn't vanquish
as of late- anguish; I can't even think of what I want to wish; I just want your bliss
 
love me hug me say you'll never put anyone above me baby you look lovely
I'll be here sunny rainy or muggy, on days we look ugly, no one will be able to take you from me
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJustine on July 20, 2007 10:31:50 PM Report
this is beautiful. it really is.
Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on July 19, 2007 01:58:33 PM Report
Wow, Shoaib.  That is a wonderful write.  Really deep and meaningful.  It also puts across a message of a kind of forlorn hope - makes its meaningfullness (is that a real word?) come across even more.




 


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