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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 9 Comments
Date Added: July 22, 2007 12:07:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Tragic
Space, a distance between two points
Love, amongst two who are of one soul
Now there is space of a canyonesque hole
Divided by the curse of mutual apathy
 
Fault, it's distributed in equal places
One, for trying to mold what isn't there
The other for simply refusing to care
Love erodes with each act of indifference
 
Stress, etched into every line of conversation
Pain, takes full control of the heart
No knowledge of how it all came apart
Yet the gap sems to widen with each day
 
Reality, hits hard with the realization
Once, you were two with so much in common
Now neither has someone they can rely on
So tragic that love had to end this way
Author's Notes:

Sadly, this happens far too often

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on October 24, 2007 08:44:26 AM Report
Oh my Henry, you are so right, it is sad and it does happen way too often.  If only ... the spark ... if only.  Well done.  I loved the way you set this up. ~Pamela
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on July 31, 2007 01:25:33 PM Report
With the divorce rate as high as it is, you hit the nail on the head with this write Henry. Love grows through hard work...something not everyone is willing to do.
Helen

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 25, 2007 04:14:12 PM Report
tell me about it! lol

Great writing BHenry

Ali x

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 24, 2007 04:33:40 PM Report
Nicely pennedm Henry....When "love" is fresh, you don't see the warts. If it isn't the real thing, after a time, warts are all you see....len
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 23, 2007 08:45:58 AM Report
The distance doesn't appear to be in the miles of separation...from what I  read, it's the emotional miles that separate...I hope that this is just a  write...but if not, you've a listening ear here...

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on July 23, 2007 08:16:23 AM Report
Its always terrible when to people drift apart when you are so in love it seems its impossible that it can happen yet it does and as you say far to often, great write Henry.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 22, 2007 10:46:17 PM Report
Henry
Yes, Distance is a factor but real love will crash through mountain emotions.. please tell me its just a  poem?? Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on July 22, 2007 03:22:01 PM Report
This is heartbreaking.  I hope this does not happen to me, I just couldn't take it. Beautiful Write Henry.

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on July 22, 2007 01:07:42 PM Report
Relationships take alot of work and care...else sadly they unravel as you so eloquently write Henry~

Maybe the unravelling is simply a testament to a will and want that was not really there to begin with?

Excellent expressing Henry...this should win an award...somewhere, for something... :o)

Hugs,
Pamela





 


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