Your Paladin. by Graham Jones

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		Date Added: July 23, 2007 05:07:22	Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Paladin.

Sitting in the arbour, reflecting on the day

And how we came together

Was like no other way

So many happy days have passed

I remember love light in your eyes

All the love and comfort given

To protect me from the lies

Then when in the hospital

In the waiting room you cried

And when it was all over

Once more at my bedside

I love you with my heart and soul

Every breath, I breathe for you

Each single tear that you have shed

Becomes my sea of blue

You are my rose that blooms full grown

The heart that beats within

You are my Lady of the lake

And I your Paladin.

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	Comment By: Jacqueline on February 21, 2008 08:22:28 AM	Report
	This poem almost brought tears to my eyes, because it is so romantic and deep and the flow is contagiously awesome. (I had to search your for your poem, because of the critique you gave me on mines and after reading your many poetry, I can truly say that your comments were of a professional nature) Great Poem Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joe McNinney on September 1, 2007 06:12:01 AM	Report
	*Very romantic Graham. The Paladins were the holy warriors of the crusades and the warriors of Arthur's tales. I love their tales and stories, Joe* Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on July 27, 2007 01:52:34 PM	Report
	I liked the way this flowed not to mention the sentiments expressed Ali x Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Glata on July 24, 2007 11:02:32 AM	Report
	Quite a romantic tragedy, Graham! Let the Paladin live evermore for his fair lady! As always, your writing is captivating, and beautiful! Hugs... Glata Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Chuck on July 24, 2007 03:59:53 AM	Report
	It's really nice...and the flow is flawless...I'm sure whoever she is she loves this...and that's why it's a great poem...good job! Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: She Whispers on July 23, 2007 10:19:53 AM	Report
	Sir Graham, Sounds like you have a great wife in your life. Hold her close with love ..embrace life with both hands.. Hugs ~ She Whispers Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Joe on July 23, 2007 07:04:02 AM	Report
	Excellent Graham. Joe Respond To This Comment

	Comment By: Wide Awake on July 23, 2007 06:01:06 AM	Report
	Very melodious poetry Graham.... Had me singing the final lines! :o) Beautifully composed this is my friend and heart touching :o) Hugs, Pamela Respond To This Comment