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Author Name: Freepenfold18 8 Comments
Date Added: July 23, 2007 05:07:22 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Paladin.
Sitting in the arbour, reflecting on the day
And how we came together
Was like no other way
So many happy days have passed
I remember love light in your eyes
All the love and comfort given
To protect me from the lies
Then when in the hospital
In the waiting room you cried
And when it was all over
Once more at my bedside
I love you with my heart and soul
Every breath, I breathe for you
Each single tear that you have shed
Becomes my sea of blue
You are my rose that blooms full grown
The heart that beats within
You are my Lady of the lake
And I your Paladin.
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJacqueline on February 21, 2008 08:22:28 AM Report
This poem almost brought tears to my eyes, because it is so romantic and deep and the flow is contagiously awesome.

 

(I had to search your for your poem, because of the critique you gave me on mines and after reading your many poetry, I can truly say that your comments were of a professional nature)

 

Great Poem

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 1, 2007 06:12:01 AM Report
Very romantic Graham. The Paladins were the holy warriors of the crusades and the warriors of Arthur's tales. I love their tales and stories, Joe
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 27, 2007 01:52:34 PM Report
I liked the way this flowed not to mention the sentiments expressed

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGlata on July 24, 2007 11:02:32 AM Report
Quite a romantic tragedy, Graham! Let the Paladin live evermore for his fair lady!

As always, your writing is captivating, and beautiful!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeChuck on July 24, 2007 03:59:53 AM Report

It's really nice...and the flow is flawless...I'm sure whoever she is she loves this...and that's why it's a great poem...good job!


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 23, 2007 10:19:53 AM Report
Sir Graham,
  Sounds like you have a great  wife in your life.
Hold her close with love ..embrace life with both hands..
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeJoe on July 23, 2007 07:04:02 AM Report
Excellent Graham. Joe
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on July 23, 2007 06:01:06 AM Report
Very melodious poetry Graham....
Had me singing the final lines! :o)

Beautifully composed this is my friend and heart touching :o)

Hugs,
Pamela






 


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