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Author Name: Moderatorhnk903 23 Comments
Date Added: July 24, 2007 21:07:00 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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While you are sleeping
The smile on your face, I can't help peeking
I confess that I've been watching you sleeping
Hope you can forgive me this indiscretion
Watching you is like an addicting confection
 
When we make love there's something that feels so right
It's one of the reasons I could watch you all night
Sleeping soundly, serenity upon your face
It's then that it hits me, your  love I can't replace
 
Every single movement, every little stir
My mind and heart agree, yes they do concur
Yes, my love I love you, you live inside my heart
My soul would become shattered, if we were to part
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeValerie Dohren on August 13, 2014 01:33:11 PM Report

A lovely romantic poem Henry, deserving of the award.

 Val

Comment By: FreeMary on March 7, 2011 07:43:32 PM Report
this was a ver lovely poem its greatly deserving of an award i loved it so much so much insight and visual you gave me very nicely done



maryann

Comment By: FreeShuberth Dias on July 23, 2009 03:35:02 PM Report
awesome!
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 3, 2008 02:53:31 PM Report
Happy birthday Henry and Congratulations for this  award.  Liked the balance, rhythme and rhyme. Things that make me enjoy reading poetry. Glad for you,  your honey and state of mind, so clearly reflected in this write.

Check out my " Forthnight flight "

Comment By: FreeJoyce on September 21, 2007 11:52:40 AM Report
very beautiful write Henry...enjoyed
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 20, 2007 06:31:34 AM Report
Simply Wonderful, as you are..

Blessings to you.

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 12, 2007 10:54:26 AM Report
If ever there becomes a vacancy in your life, I would most certainly wish to apply for the position Henry...lol you are the best at expressing your romantic heart....loved this to bits and it is so deserving of the award my dear!

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeStar on September 9, 2007 07:16:01 PM Report
I guess we all have done this Henry...the reason why it's touched so many..bringing back beautiful memories...

Lovely write Henry, and congrats on the award.

Star*

Comment By: FreeLady Literary on August 10, 2007 12:32:44 AM Report

This is sweet. Congrats on winning a featured.


Lit


Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on August 8, 2007 03:02:11 PM Report
Oh, how I know this feeling!  I had a maternal feelings of awe while my son slept. 

Congratulations on the Featured Award!

Patty

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on August 8, 2007 01:02:50 PM Report
This is so sweet and touching... I'm sure this won you "brownie points" with the person whom you had in mind. lol.

 

Congrats!

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeGlata on August 8, 2007 08:26:14 AM Report
This certainly deserved to win! I"m so glad to see this Gold sitting atop such a beautiful piece, Henry...VERY deserving indeed! Each time I read this it just touches something deep inside.

Absolutely wonderful work!

Congrats again!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on August 6, 2007 09:57:00 PM Report
Congrats on your Featured Poem Award. I can relate to this in so many ways. I love to just lay quietly and watch Fletch sleeping.
Tracy

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 6, 2007 11:13:45 AM Report
Congrats on your award!  Well deserved.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 5, 2007 06:38:22 PM Report
Henry:  congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on August 1, 2007 07:12:57 AM Report
beautiful,Henry
love shining bright and true
                                  Micky


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 27, 2007 07:02:22 PM Report
Sounds like the real thing, Roger...Of course, a new love can have the same effect..You know, before you start to notice the warts...Lovely poem, my friend...len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on July 27, 2007 03:35:32 PM Report

The way you snore, it's amazing that I sleep at all! LOL! Nicely done Henry, Joe


Comment By: FreeRin Marie on July 27, 2007 11:30:30 AM Report
"When we make love there's something that feels so right

It's one of the reasons I could watch you all night"

 

This is absolutely lovely.... It is every womans greatest desire to be loved this much- Yours is quite a lucky lady.

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 25, 2007 04:49:51 PM Report
Tears of breathtaking sighs fall reading this henry chicken. More men should love and adore the one by their side. You are a wonderful person Henry and she is a lucky lady

 

Beautiful

 

Love Angelxx 

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on July 25, 2007 11:06:22 AM Report
Awesome writing Hank.  Hope you showed this to her.
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 25, 2007 07:57:36 AM Report
Ohhhhhhhhhh WOW! (infinity) This is love in it's most beautiful form...Pure and directly from your heart to the heart of the one that you love. It doesn't get any better than that! A confession of love like this is bound to have every woman that reads this  envious of the woman you love. As Pamela said below...leaves me breathless!

Great job, you romantic fella you!

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on July 24, 2007 10:08:32 PM Report
....This is beautiful Henry...It left me breathless! :o)

This poem weaves a powerful, magical spell....:o)

Loved this :o)

Hugs,
Pamela





 


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