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Author Name: Freejohncarter 6 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2007 18:07:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Dreams

Dreams

 

With joy the nighttime blessed

My eyes so weary for rest

My head upon itís pillow impressed

Undressed in dreams un-suppressed

 

Twilight a magical time

When I am me and

You are mine and

Life is merely just a rhyme

A lyrical dream a simple line.

 

For when the day breaks slowly

I reach for you, you only

Can take the darkness

Of this lonely night

And make me love you

Again and again.

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAdri on September 3, 2007 03:34:38 AM Report
Oh John...  Wow, what a love poem.  It has the elements of that warm fuzzy feeling we all love to feel when in love, in every word.  Beautiful, how a love poem should be. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on September 2, 2007 03:46:43 PM Report
such a brilliantly deep write, dreams are our mind imagining things that maybe could not possibly be, beyond what we could ever think about, good or bad its not our choice, maybe a sign or a warning, whos to say,
great write john
~Robin

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 29, 2007 10:30:06 AM Report
phew!!!!!!!!

this is your very best to date....simply exquisite

Ali x

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on July 29, 2007 08:52:19 AM Report
I live this dream "again and again".

I wanted to write a poem like this, but

your brilliant write will do just fine.

 

Richard

Comment By: Freeb doneff on July 27, 2007 12:11:59 AM Report
To me, this was full of longing, anguish, gentle sighing and a soft warmth that just bled throughout the whole write. I found this to be something I could read over and over again..very nice touch here..
Barbie

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 26, 2007 06:26:53 PM Report
John,
Oh, The dreams of longing  to hold who you desire... (( This part of the poem is just breathless to be loved over and over.. Goodness I'm trembling at the thought.. you write the most beautiful love poems...(( I would love to write a love poem with you sometime.. Who ever this is for I do hope she reads its...Your gentle heart so full of love...

For when the day breaks slowly


I reach for you, you only


Can take the darkness


Of this lonely night


And make me love you


Again and again.


   Hugs ~ She Whispers






 


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