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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 9 Comments
Date Added: January 24, 2008 11:01:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She didn't see
She didn't see her shadow.
She didn't have a name.
She listened to the howling winds
the music was all the same.

She didn't see her tears
fall softly to the ground.
She didn't hear the pounding sound
of footsteps all around.

She didn't see your shadow.
She didn't know your name.
She listened to your tired voice
 it was no longer the same.

She didn't see your tears
falling tenderly on hers.
She didn't hear the pounding hearts
of two lovers.

You stood there watching carefully
as she danced the night away.
Her silhouette soft and beautiful
etched in your mind to stay.


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 13, 2008 08:15:03 PM Report
LOvely and very sad, Helen..How ya doin', kid?
Comment By: FreeSteve on April 4, 2008 08:52:02 AM Report
A moment presented...a chance lost...what could have been.....wonderful write.
Comment By: FreeGlata on January 25, 2008 10:47:09 AM Report
None is blinder than the one that will not see...or has never been allowed to see.

Beautifully penned, Helen, and full of pain.

Hugs

Glata

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on January 25, 2008 06:37:52 AM Report
How many, many opportunities do we miss brcause we just don't see.?

Food for thought dear one. Maybe this one should be in the depression catagory.

 

Hugs,

Richard

Comment By: FreeAngel on January 25, 2008 03:47:49 AM Report
Beautiful Helen

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 24, 2008 08:49:04 PM Report
Wow...what can one say to this... Very moving and so touching to the heart.. I love this one so much..
~ Hugs  She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSammie on January 24, 2008 05:42:47 PM Report
wow. This is a great poem. I really enjoyed it.

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 24, 2008 01:59:30 PM Report
A subtle intensity that blew me away...
Comment By: FreeCandy on January 24, 2008 01:26:25 PM Report
well done, interesting write! I enjoyed it!




 


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