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Author Name: Freequeens1 4 Comments
Date Added: August 16, 2007 03:08:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Under My Spell

Under My Spell

You want me; I can see it in your eyes,
My graphic design stands out in this pen.
Itís how my black and white stripes hypnotize.
 
It happened before you could realize
That you were under my spell, you canít win.
You want me; I can see it in your eyes.
 
The lion; I donít want to criticize,
But he thinks heís King in our little bin,
Itís how my black and white stripes hypnotize.
 
Canít you see that I am the perfect size?
Iím not even holding my belly in.
You want me; I can see it in your eyes.
 
Wanting a friend, that's how I fantasize,
Crowded in this big bin makes my head spin,
It's how my black and white stripes hypnotize.
 
How can you say no to these eyes so wise?
More than a striped horse, Iím Yang to your Yin.
You want me; I can see it in your eyes,
Itís how my black and white stripes hypnotize.
Author's Notes:
Taken from the point of view of a stuffed zebra waiting to be picked out of a bin at a toy store.  Written in the Villanelle form.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on August 10, 2009 04:25:02 PM Report
This is cuter than cute, Pen...I WANT YOU!! :o)...len
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on August 21, 2007 02:42:39 PM Report
When I first started reading this I thought very nice and sensual poem, LOL, boy did you fool me Patty, great write!  Henry
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 16, 2007 10:16:49 AM Report
It's cute! You've brought me a smile this morning :o)

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: FreeHarold Ham McLelland on August 16, 2007 08:34:04 AM Report
VERY GOOD Lady!!!  Had me going until I read, "About This Poem"...  LOL!!!  Gotta watch them stuffed animals...




 


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