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Author Name: Freejohncarter 7 Comments
Date Added: August 18, 2007 13:08:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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When you run on empty

The night can seem so long

All you have is memories

Where you used to belong

A sunny day

Could fade away

In shadowed thunder of doubt

But without the rain

There could be no sunshine

And with no dawn

I could never tell you

I love you

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Comment By: FreeAdri on September 3, 2007 04:01:00 AM Report
Some poems just makes an impact, and this is one of them.  Beautifully crafter, and the two last lines are so strong.  This is poetry as it should be. 
Adri x

Comment By: PremiumJillian K. Alexis on September 2, 2007 07:41:23 AM Report
Oh my! Love and romance, all in one poem. You are one of the best...Love Poets...I have ever read. Beautifully penned John...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 20, 2007 04:36:26 PM Report
delightfully heartfelt, loving and brilliant, inspiring completely

Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 19, 2007 07:11:00 AM Report
Yes, we need one to appreciate the other. Lovely.

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on August 19, 2007 03:23:10 AM Report
Brilliant sir.  I love it all, but dawn is my favorite

time. Its my creative time,



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 18, 2007 02:36:50 PM Report

 Very heart felt poem.. I think sometimes we just have  to stumble in the darkness  to finally see the light... I so enjoy your poetry.. Hang in there ..there is an Angel just for you.... When she comes to you and if she is the right one you will be able to say the words... That you must say!.
HUgs ~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 18, 2007 01:47:30 PM Report
oh what a delightful poem, John. Its a sure reminder we need to both sides of the coin to allow ourselves to flourish

Ali x


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