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Author Name: Freemaybememories 5 Comments
Date Added: August 18, 2007 14:08:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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hold me forever

Dripping tears like candle wax I slowly melt

A love so holy that my whole soul surely felt

A day of relief, a life with out grief; a simple peace

Laying in your arms beneath the sheets, deep in sleep

I wished that all the stars in the universe were mine

But your love shines more than all of them combined

Letís bask in the after glow take it slow and slow unwind

Youíre like a diamond in the sky, a gem thatís hard to find

I know the world will be jealous because our love is infinite

More complex then a rose is delicate, softer than minds are intricate

Calm now like a still pond, closer than carbon atoms will bond

Iím honestly still in awe, your radiance spread like the sunís will long

Can you just say you will love me forever? Hold me whatever the weather

Just stay here when it thunders, weíll watch the lightening strike together

Honestly your comfort is worth more than I can even remember

We face it all together, beach in the summer, by a fire in December

I promise that despite my mistakes I will forever stay faithful

I need your love stable, your heart able, and your body graceful

Letís close our eyes in darkness and dream that forever is not at it seems

I will wait for you to be apart of this and believe that this love you too agree

 

So from now till forever if you love me then know I will love you better than ever

Believe me I will hold you closer, trust in me and I will hold that trust forever  

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRachel on September 5, 2008 05:23:03 PM Report

"Dripping tears like candle wax I slowly melt


A love so holy that my whole soul surely felt "

now that's quite a way to start a poem......

I love those lines, made me want to be under the sheets with you ; )

Comment By: Freeamy Louise on December 8, 2007 07:46:52 AM Report
oh my goodness, what a sweet romantic you are!!! i felt like i was watching a love blossom before my eyes, your poem took me there!

 

thats visual writing my friend

 

ames xxx

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on September 14, 2007 05:16:41 PM Report
This is great, filled with all the fee;ings being in love brings, great work Shoaib.  Henry
Comment By: FreeKevin Dutton on August 21, 2007 10:51:05 AM Report
A really deep, meaningful write.  You seem to have a knack of putting feelings down on paper so well.......something I always struggle to do in my own work.

 

Good stuff as always Shoaib

Comment By: FreeGlata on August 20, 2007 07:40:07 AM Report
Shoaib, this is a write full of beauty, and very well presented! I have to admit, when I first saw the title, I hesitated about reading it, but now am very glad I did.

Beautiful write, hon....

Glata





 


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