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Author Name: Freequeens1 5 Comments
Date Added: August 23, 2007 02:08:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Celestial Game

Celestial Game

Sister Moon chases Brother Sun,
Hes on the run.
When shes waxing,
Hes relaxing.
 
She will never catch him because
There is a pause
When she is full,
He has the pull.
 
After the pause, the Sun pursues,
Taking his cues
From her waning,
Long sustaining.
Author's Notes:
The game of tag the Sun and Moon seem to play across the sky every month.  Done in Minute Poetry.  Syllable count of 8-4-4-4 with 3 stanzas in rhyme scheme of aabb ccdd eeff.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 12, 2008 06:08:17 PM Report
Sounds like Penny mythology.. :o)..Let the chase begin!! You even threw in a little scientific fact here. len
Comment By: FreeLeroy Taylor Lyon on August 30, 2007 02:03:25 AM Report
azza never seen a syle or write like this i used to write naturaly with a a talent like this

but diff style youve enspired me

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on August 28, 2007 01:56:39 PM Report
Very nice and great use of the form, too!
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on August 25, 2007 11:49:41 PM Report
I really liked this Patty, it had a sort of nursery rhyme quality to it. Very well written!   Henry
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 23, 2007 10:10:22 AM Report
This was a fun chase done in a neat style. It sounds almost like rap...

Cool job!

Hugs...Glata, watching the skies...





 


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