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Author Name: Freetimespell 20 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2007 11:09:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Make A Wish
Beneath the skies
of purple hues.
Slow ebbing tide
and tranquil views.

A shooting star
falls from the sky.
I make a wish
then shut my eyes.

I see you smile,
then laugh at me.
We were young,
our love was free.

A fleeting glance
of time gone by.
Tranquil moments
inside my eyes.

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Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on July 25, 2012 11:57:19 AM Report

Going to my favs.


It  flows like a river of words.

I reach in and drew up the pearls.

Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on April 30, 2011 11:37:12 PM Report
Your poem flows so smoothly - I read it over and over.
Comment By: FreeKimber Turpin on January 3, 2009 10:55:36 PM Report
This was more than deserving of your award! Such a beautiful piece, very romantic and loving! It is definitely going into my favs. :o)


Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 15, 2008 11:41:26 PM Report
simple and eloquent, very deserving of the award.

= )


Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on August 28, 2008 10:46:36 AM Report
Beautiful. Clean pure love of life and love. Enjoyed reading you. Congrats, you are a winner. A hint, try adding "so" to young, the 11 th line, for a perfect 444444 all the way. Look for my "Timelessness" to be posted soon.

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 19, 2008 10:43:05 AM Report
Magnificent loved it word for word


Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on January 10, 2008 03:11:36 PM Report
This is wonderful, Congrats on the well deserved award.


Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on November 5, 2007 02:08:21 AM Report
Congratulations on the award :o)



Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on October 16, 2007 03:55:36 PM Report
Simply put well done..congrats on the award.

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on October 10, 2007 06:52:14 AM Report

Lovely flowing write ~congratulations!

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on October 8, 2007 06:15:02 PM Report
congrats on the award!
Comment By: FreeStar on October 8, 2007 09:44:41 AM Report
This is beautiful Paul... Congrats on a well deserved award.


Comment By: FreeGlata on October 8, 2007 06:18:14 AM Report

Sweet moments  of  tranquility...beautifully written! Congrats to ya, Paul...



Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 7, 2007 06:37:52 PM Report
Told you this was a winner.  Super congrats on this very deserved Feature Poem Award.


Lady D

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on September 27, 2007 06:46:47 PM Report
Nice little poem.



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 25, 2007 01:12:15 AM Report
Love was so young in the eyes of youth!! Perhaps its a very innocent time which is better?? Love breaths in many shapes and forms.. Great poem Hugs She

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on September 24, 2007 08:31:53 PM Report
Like this very much.  Very good write.


Lady D

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 24, 2007 01:22:24 PM Report
Hopefully you wish came true! How innocent and playful this poem is! =))



Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on September 24, 2007 11:03:55 AM Report
Very, very nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 24, 2007 11:02:58 AM Report
Beautiful Words... Simply So Lovely.




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