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Author Name: Freetimespell 6 Comments
Date Added: September 27, 2007 19:09:30 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Edge Of Sleep
I balanced on
the edge of my dream,
then patiently wait.

My disappointment bursts,
into a thousand stars
then slowly fades.
 
Licking my weakness,
the darkness returns
to the edges.
 
Suddenly I except,
yet another nightmare,
slowly shutting my eyes. 
Author's Notes:
Have you ever had one of those dreams, just getting to the best bit... and then you're woken up!!
Nothing worse than losing a good dream. Try and find it, you end up finding a nightmare.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFilthy on July 24, 2008 05:46:31 PM Report
I loved that title! and the poem was brilliant. I relate well to this.
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on October 16, 2007 03:59:31 PM Report
Trying to replace a good dream, filling in the blanks...yeh I've done that...doesn't work. So why does a nightmare not get interrupted? Oh well that's life.
Helen

Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on October 2, 2007 11:51:02 AM Report
ever had One???? Gosh ive had many lol

Nice little write

 

Lyn.

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on September 28, 2007 07:28:32 AM Report
I like your poem but I'm still waiting for that good dream.

 

Richard

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 27, 2007 11:07:32 PM Report
Licking my weakness

the darkness returns

to the edges.

 this says it all!! She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on September 27, 2007 08:08:46 PM Report
Liked the subject matter, Timespell!

 

CeeCee

 





 


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