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Author Name: Freejohncarter 8 Comments
Date Added: October 03, 2007 16:10:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Chain
The Chain

 

 

To be shackled for so long
In a chain we made to bind us
Was nothing but a dream
A life that lays behind us.
The bond we made
Is another link
In the chain that will never divide us
And our children
Will be the voice
In our life that will remind us
Love goes on
And we wait for it to find us.

 

 

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on October 11, 2007 01:46:15 PM Report
So much said in so few words...you've explained very well how those chains end one part of life but connect us to another while we wait for a new love to find us. Great work.
Helen

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 7, 2007 03:39:27 PM Report
This is so true.  It all is a chain; connected to everything.  Wise words, and so beautiful. 
Adri x

Comment By: PremiumGlata on October 5, 2007 03:47:16 PM Report
Very well written and it says so much...Great work!!

Hugs to you..

Glata

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 4, 2007 09:32:33 AM Report
short well metred
and full of meaning

Ali x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 4, 2007 12:58:45 AM Report
The long chain of life strangles us as we tug to be free... a honest down to earth poem.. God most of us have been there!! Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 3, 2007 08:54:23 PM Report
We often create our own chains and they can be very restricting.  Love should be with us always, if it isn't we should find love as soon as we know it is missing. Fine penning!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: Freeb doneff on October 3, 2007 07:39:40 PM Report
Sometimes those invisable chains can be a blessing, sometimes a curse..This made me think of how every chain is made up of small circles, circles make me think of completion, and how we equate being loved, being in love, having love, as being complete. Hmmm..I think you have made me have a chain of thoughts..not sure that's a good thing,lol, but I'm not seeing smoke yet..lol
As always, a pleasure to read.

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on October 3, 2007 05:02:59 PM Report
Good write John. It seems the longer a chain lasts, the stronger it becomes even though it may pinch a little.

 

Richard

 


 






 


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