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Comment By:  Lynn Cowman on October 23, 2007 03:41:13 AM |
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An explosion of colour is what we all desire in our hearts, Nice Write John
Lyn.
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on October 15, 2007 02:40:50 PM |
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When two hearts collide the colors are extra vibrant and her eyes cannot be tainted when your love for her stays strong. Beautiful John.
Helen
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| Comment By: b doneff on October 13, 2007 01:52:20 AM |
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So much to be said about the way we see things, and others, when we are in that "L" mode. Our perspective on things is different. Nothing is impossible, because we have someone there beside us; nothing is as sweet, as when we share it, and the world becomes a much better place when we have love on our side. And yes, even the colours are brighter, as though the whole place just opened up to us and is ours for the taking. I Imagined this in a soft watercolor..
b
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| Comment By: A.P. on October 13, 2007 12:26:07 AM |
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the last lines/rhyme made the whole poem for me, it drew it away from the artist/love poem genre into something deeper.
an enjoyable read.
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Comment By:  lionheart on October 12, 2007 05:25:55 PM |
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The sound of colour...and love. That's what this is.
Really beautiful poem sir.
Richard
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| Comment By: She Whispers on October 12, 2007 04:57:25 PM |
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John ,
The Vivid colors of .....Love with all its embracing rapture..luster of colors within the eyes of love..simply beautiful...
Sounds like a man falling in the arms of breathless seduction
Hugs ~ She Whispers
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| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on October 12, 2007 04:40:21 PM |
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I see a confidence in your expression builiding all the time
its great
Ali x
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| Comment By: Adri on October 12, 2007 04:35:11 PM |
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Oh how utterly beautiful! You are right, with love explodes, the colours will the most beautiful ever seen. This is so beautiful, I am in awe.
Adri x
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on October 12, 2007 04:19:11 PM |
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If love ain't the answer, it will do 'til the real thing comes along...Just lovely...len
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| Comment By: Glata on October 12, 2007 03:37:24 PM |
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Well stated, John...The colours of love are rich and vibrant indeed!
Hugs and smiles...
Glata
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| Comment By: Robin Constantinou on October 12, 2007 03:14:34 PM |
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thats such a heartwarming poem to read john, i wish i could write in someways like that, i'm not really a lovey guy i try to write some for my g/f but they just dont come out as i want them too, for them to be sweet and loving, i cant seem to make them that way
oh well i'll keep trying great write
~Robin
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