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Author Name: Freejohncarter 10 Comments
Date Added: October 20, 2007 07:10:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Words Two

Words Two

 

My words are just like April rain
That tip- toe from my tongue
And dance upon a lonely leaf
That is Autumnal hung
Itís release will end the silence
Of this ever changing day
The Autumn mist
To be sun kissed
Disappears in cumulus bliss
I tip-toe on this leaf my life
So carefully i balance.

 

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Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on November 3, 2007 06:45:57 AM Report
The fragile balance of our lives described to a tee. A pleasure to read John. And, Happy birthday. You kids have it all before you. jp
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on November 3, 2007 05:37:17 AM Report
Very well done indeed john crafted to perfection as they say, nice flow and some classic lines, Oh and a happy birthday my friend.
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on October 28, 2007 11:56:18 AM Report
wish i could write as good as you John.

Another great write and inspiring words,

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on October 23, 2007 09:30:39 AM Report
your words are like rain drops, splashing onto the roof that is my mind and giving me a desire to want to write myself, poetry like yours full of soul is not something that is easily found, great work john
~Robin

Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on October 23, 2007 03:37:38 AM Report
 

This gives great imagery and beautiful thoughts.. Nicely Done!

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on October 22, 2007 03:15:09 PM Report
Words carefully tiptoeing from the tougue keeping life in balance...Brilliant John.

Helen

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 22, 2007 02:45:02 AM Report
Oh beautiful!  You must be careful to keep the balance.  I love this, another brilliant expression of your amazing talent.
Adri x

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on October 21, 2007 08:21:04 AM Report
Very nice John.

If we had no rain or words like these

there would be no worthwhile autumn.

 

Richard

 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 20, 2007 10:20:27 AM Report
Sir  John,
In life we must have balance to survive we do tip toe sometimes to try to understand our emotions with changing seasons....
Very beautiful poem that tugs at the heart strings.
Thank you for sharing  a part of your gentle mind and passionate heart..
Hugs and Love my friend ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 20, 2007 08:18:22 AM Report
I nearly did not read the 'cumulus' bit right  ;-)

Lovely poem John but I felt a certain uncompleteness in the last line?

Ali x





 


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