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Author Name: Freejohncarter 10 Comments
Date Added: November 03, 2007 09:11:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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For You
 
For You

 

The strangest things can happen
While your busy making other plans
Your mind is going one way
Your heart is touched
By distant hands
And a world of emptiness
Can be filled to overflowing
And to dance
In the shower of words
That is your name
Could be the beginning
Or the end
Of this lonely game I play
And the answer to
My never ending day
The clouds that dance so quickly
Before this waning moon
The moment that I long for
Cannot come too soon
My eyes will be wide open
My heart an open door
And my love I will give
Until forevermore
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on November 6, 2007 03:07:45 AM Report
:o)... Nice writing again John

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on November 5, 2007 03:27:41 PM Report
Your beautiful heart never fails to touch us John.....such lovely poetry to read.

~C

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on November 5, 2007 02:55:57 PM Report
Yes strange things can happen when the heart is touched and the promise of forever more is just breathless. Touching write John.
Helen

Comment By: PremiumGlata on November 5, 2007 02:40:58 PM Report
Lovely work here, John...You've a tender heart, it would seem.

Hugs and smiles...

Glata

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 5, 2007 03:28:43 AM Report

Oh John, this is marvelous. So beautiful full of love and a promise.  I know exactly what you mean, and I echo the words you say here, every one.  The last two lines totally summarize the whole beauty and meaning and feeling of this wonderful piece. 
I love it, and it is only a wonderful beautiful gentle heart that can write something so loving and beautiful. 
Love
Adri x


Comment By: Premiumlionheart on November 4, 2007 01:07:58 PM Report
Your poetry from the heart is loved and

appreciated by the guys too John. Rest assured.

 

Richard

 

Comment By: Freeabby on November 4, 2007 10:26:44 AM Report

Sweet. Intelligently done.


Abby


Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 3, 2007 01:39:33 PM Report
John, this was nothing but lovely. Breathtakingly lovely. You do such an honor to the feelings we give and have in love by way of your words.  It all sounds so dreamy and sweet....now, if it really worked this way, sighhhhhhhhh...
Top shelf stuff here this was, and I greatly enjoyed it.
b

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 3, 2007 11:34:44 AM Report
A tender poem from a loving heart

Ali x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 3, 2007 10:21:15 AM Report
John,
 Ahhhh... such a very beautiful poem straight from your gentle  heart...   See why we all love your poetry so much ?? .This love that everyone  seeks is inside our loving heart  it only takes wings when it is time...to love again...
I love this so much...it has depth and longing  with such a vivid colors of swirling clouds...lovely my friend.. Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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