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Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 1 Comments
Date Added: November 08, 2007 21:11:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Grieving & Loss Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
~SEARCHING STARS~...Cowritten with our lovely Bug
 
 
Broken and empty alone
is the vastness of this sadness
in the evening
in the nighttime
of this day.
 
The birdsong has finished
for the ending of this evening
and I don't want
for you
to go away
 
SORROW FLOODS MY HEART,
AND SEEPS INSIDE MY MIND;
AS I RECALL YOUR' WORDS,
"I DON'T WANT YOU IN MY LIFE!
 
I'VE FOUND ANOTHER WOMAN,
AND I LOVE HER MORE THAN YOU;
I'M SICK OF LIVING THIS WAY,
WHAT WAS I SUPPOSE TO DO"?
 
I don't know how the stars look
when you see them
shining in the darkness
of loneliness
in their fatal sky
 
I will know tonight when I stare up
without you here.
You will be with her
without me
Somehow you passed me by
 
I CAN NOT UNDERSTAND
WHY YOU LEFT ME ALL ALONE;
IT HURTS THAT YOU ARE WITH HER,
AND NOT WITH ME AT HOME!
 
You said that we would never
say goodbye.
Your pictures
line the walls,
memories forgotten of you and I.
 
EVERYWHERE I GO,
I SEE MEMORIES OF YOU AND ME;
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO GO,
I DIDN'T WANT YOU TO LEAVE.
 
I AM A VERY PROUD WOMAN,
SO I WON'T HOLD YOU BACK;
IF THIS IS WHAT YOU TRULY WANT,
THEN YOU SHOULD PACK YOUR' BAGS!
Author's Notes:
Thank you so much Shanna for writing this with me. I really enjoyed working with you. Perhaps we can do another cowrite soon. Love ya girl...Jillian
 
My word's are all capatalized.
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Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on November 8, 2007 11:41:03 PM Report
Anytime. I loved working with you, too!!

luv ya!

~Shanna





 


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