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Author Name: Freejohncarter 5 Comments
Date Added: November 16, 2007 09:11:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Night That Never Ends

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

Night That Never Ends

 

Time is just the space
That makes me linger
Your heart is young
And mine a wasted waste of time.
I see the sunrise
And I feel so young
I see myself a boy
Once again chasing rainbows
Playing conkers with my friends.
The night that never ends
We could spend our whole life looking
Never find what we seek
But to waste this moment
Would be a regret
That our hearts may not forget.
I could spend my life
Just loving you
It would not be a waste
To taste that joy
Until then
I will be the boy
That chases rainbows
In a night that never ends.

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on November 18, 2007 10:53:30 AM Report
How wonderful to know that spending life loving some-one would not be a waste.
For now chasing rainbows. Very sweet.
Helen

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 16, 2007 10:17:00 AM Report
a lovely heartfelt romantic piece.
I was just wondering if it should be "day" that never ends as night has different connotations? anyway dreamy and wistfull

Ali x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 16, 2007 10:00:44 AM Report
Once again a very beautiful poem from your gentle passionate  heart..
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 16, 2007 09:56:19 AM Report
I agree with Glata.  I love this so much.  All I can say is *sigh*.

Love
Adri xxxx

Comment By: PremiumGlata on November 16, 2007 09:39:08 AM Report
Very beautifully written, John...Expressive, with a foreward looking hope and a backwards glance at the joys  of the past. Loving someone can really do that for a person, as you've  expressed in the last lines.

Great work!

Hugs...

Glata





 


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