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Author Name: Freejohncarter 8 Comments
Date Added: November 19, 2007 02:11:06 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Mr Moonlight

Mr Moonlight


Hello Mr Sunshine
So long Mr Rain
Welcome Mr Moonlight
Iím barking once again
Ití been a while
Since you and I
Had reason for a talk
I am here tonight
To ask you
So letís take a walk
You see I have this problem
My heart will not be still
It keeps on jumping up and down
My head has lost itís will
I am not messing
Or cross-dressing
For anyone you know
But I have seen this little number
In a distant land
Since you see her more than I
You just might understand
Before the madness takes me
And my brain leaves me in vain
Ask if she will save me
Before I go insane.



Author's Notes:
Is there a Doctor in the house.  I looked in the categories for lunacy apparently i am the only one. Lol
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Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on November 22, 2007 04:23:13 AM Report
This Is Great!... Loved it



Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on November 21, 2007 09:39:55 AM Report
i love the way this flows so easily and so well, love has a grasp over us, and for as long as we can, we dont want it to ever let go,
great write john

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on November 20, 2007 12:09:37 PM Report
Oh this is so cute John...still gigling...very nice to wake up to this morning. Well this lunacy thing is it contagious? Don't mind catching it. lol.


Comment By: FreeGlata on November 19, 2007 12:25:38 PM Report
Just to let you know....we're all in the same boat when love takes over...That's just how it is :o)

May as well get used to that  feeling really fast! (grin)

Hugs and giggles, my  friend, I thought this was adorable!

(no doctor can  cure this particular ailment)


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 19, 2007 11:33:43 AM Report
 What a clever poem of thoughts ..sounds like a man who eyes no longer see raindrops ...but that old bewitching moon...with its warm glow..
we all get a little crazy under that embracing spell
~ Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on November 19, 2007 07:55:44 AM Report
lol! Oh, hell John...Everybody else is crazy around here,

not us!  lol



Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 19, 2007 04:41:41 AM Report
Awwww, this was so cute and sweet all at the same time! I'm sure she feels the same way, and hey, lunacy ain't all that bad, I should know! Oh, and I have been a doctor and hung out the shingle here, lol..Shall I pencil you in for a stint on the couch at about three? I'll let my secretary Judy know you are coming and get the inkblots out, lol...
Glad to see your heart jumping around crazy, lol, you take care..

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 19, 2007 04:18:41 AM Report

You have it too?!?!?  Thank goodness, I thought I was the only one who is experiencing those symptoms.  ;o)  LOL
Extremely cute, and totally adoring. It is feet sweeping!
I love it!
Adri xxx

And, Of course!!! 


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