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Author Name: Freequeens1 4 Comments
Date Added: December 11, 2007 22:12:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Picturing You--Villanelle
I only have to picture you
To see the love light in your eyes
And I am warmed through and through.
 
It comes on me out of the blue
And barely containing my sighs,
I only have to picture you.
 
When smoke goes up the chimney flue,
My thoughts of you also up rise
And I am warmed through and through.
 
Times spent with you are like brand new,
Feelings of wonder and surprise,
I only have to picture you.
 
You listen to my point of view,
But I hear your voice, thatís the prize
And I am warmed through and through.
 
A light touch of your hand, you knew
Would make my temperature rise.
I only have to picture you
And I am warmed through and through.
Author's Notes:
I was experimenting with how our thoughts and feelings can control our bodies..........this is the result.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 23, 2008 02:01:50 AM Report
I love writing villanelles too and this one is just awesome. Great work!

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 23, 2008 11:45:55 PM Report
This is the best vanila I've ever read, Pen...:o)...len
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on December 12, 2007 01:17:10 PM Report
Emotions can be like a puppeteer controlling our bodies, sometimes it can be bad but sometimes it can be oh so good. :o)
Comment By: FreeGlata on December 12, 2007 09:08:49 AM Report
Beautifully done, Patty...Anticipation makes it all worthwhile.

Hugs

Glata





 


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