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Author Name: Freequeens1 11 Comments
Date Added: December 18, 2007 22:12:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Swift's Flight

Swiftís Flight

My first sight of the Zion Cliffs
Sent my soul soaring to the skies,
Circling and dancing with the swifts,
They can go where my spirit flies.
 
Be aware of the zephyr wind
Ever changing, navigating,
Trying to find the Zen within
By seeking the calm and soothing.
 
Perfection sought, but seldom found,
Content by being a witness
To flights while Iím still on the ground
Of the darting birdís fitness.
 
I will take the sight to my grave,
Wishing that I could be so brave.
Author's Notes:
For a contest on allpoetry.com with a prompt:  Zephyrs & Zen Shape Zion's Horizon.  Picture inspired @ www.allpoetry.com/contest/2381974   Picture "Zion Cliffs" by Pierre Vincent.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on September 5, 2008 07:18:27 PM Report
CONGRATULATIONS,  I really enjoyed this one, balanced meaningful visuals and rhymnes. Did you read my "Forthnight flight' ?

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 21, 2008 12:59:52 AM Report
Wonderful, congratulations!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeCathy on August 19, 2008 04:34:54 PM Report
Congratulations on a well deserve award.. bravo... A exceptional write one which I truly enjoyed reading
........Cathy

Comment By: FreeAdri on August 18, 2008 01:37:07 AM Report
I am so glad this won!  Congratulations on the Feature!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: PremiumLindaM on August 17, 2008 10:45:23 PM Report
Congratulations on winning the featured award for this
beautiful poem.
Linda

Comment By: Freejess on August 17, 2008 09:37:30 PM Report
congrats on the well deserved award
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 17, 2008 08:55:12 PM Report
Super congratulations for this Feature Poem Award.  Very deserved.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeSteve on February 14, 2008 02:27:50 PM Report
Very deep.....makes you think
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on January 12, 2008 05:34:53 PM Report
I agreee, very visual without the picture. The feeling of lightness and liberation are very strong in this..len
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on December 19, 2007 11:36:21 AM Report
Beautiful and inspirational, I like! :o)
Comment By: FreeGlata on December 19, 2007 06:23:50 AM Report
Beautifully written, and truly a visual, even without a graphic photo!

Great work, Patty...

Hugs...

Glata





 


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