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Author Name: Freewildhorse 7 Comments
Date Added: September 12, 2003 00:09:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Alone
My night's filled with tear's, I have scar no one can see, Trapped inside this world of sorrow, That i made my own. But they see happiness in my eyes Not to see all my pain, As i am in his chamber, As he gets the best of me,and takes control they not to see. When i laugh,im crying inside But i revealed nothing, Why can't they see, Because I'm alone in this chamber. I bury my face into my tear soak pillow, As he touch forbibding place's, Hope he will soon be done Flesh feels abused, But i revealed nothing, As I am alone.
Author's Notes:
I build a wall around my marriage for year's not to revealed nothing to family and friend's What it was like. Thank you for reading my poem!
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on October 2, 2005 08:45:35 PM Report
People shouldn't have to endure this kind of pain. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeLizzie on January 28, 2004 12:54:12 AM Report
Aww.. When something like this happens, you should never feel like you are alone.. There are alwayz people out there willing to listen and help, so remember that.. Don't keep your feelings to yourself.. It only gets you lonelier and hurt in the long run.. But yeah.. Touching poem.. Good job

Love, Lizzie
Comment By: Freeloveisendless on December 4, 2003 02:44:33 PM Report
BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!WAY TO GO!!
Comment By: FreeAmanda W on September 13, 2003 06:21:53 PM Report
Well written so full of your raw emotions... I know your pain!
Great write and Welcome to the site!!
LOL Amanda
Comment By: FreeRichard on September 13, 2003 08:01:52 AM Report
awwww this is so sad,but very beautifuly written
Comment By: FreeEdward G Boggs on September 13, 2003 05:57:19 AM Report
most sad...but very good writing...
Comment By: FreeVictoria on September 12, 2003 12:57:11 AM Report
You expressed yourself so well in this. Excellent choice of words.




 


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