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Author Name: Freenoahcount 8 Comments
Date Added: December 30, 2007 13:12:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sadly, Tolkien
Upon sodden Flanders' fields
Tolkien into deathpools stared
Joshua's sun would not shine
this day or night
marching, seeking, beseeching
reeking
Tolkien into deathpools stared
time no longer an issue,
nor victory gained
rain replenished despair,
high drama danced in mire
Upon sodden Flanders' fields
Tolkien into deathpools stared, knowing
these were not reflections,
but death masks relaxed
Tolkien into deathpools stared, knowing
this was not new, forever sadly flowing
Author's Notes:
Dedicated to a very brave woman, and a very thoughtful, brilliant man, Benazir Bhutto and J.R.R. Tolkien.
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 5, 2008 03:31:01 AM Report
Wonderful write and dedication. I am happy you won an award for this..its great!
Congratulations~
Tracie

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 4, 2008 06:02:55 PM Report
Noah:  super congratulations on your Feature Poem Award.  Very nicely done.

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeAdri on March 4, 2008 01:59:33 PM Report
Great piece!  Congratulations on this piece!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 4, 2008 12:19:32 PM Report
Congratulations Noah, it is great to see your work recognized!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on December 31, 2007 08:20:20 AM Report
Tremendous and timely dedication.

Richard

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on December 31, 2007 07:59:35 AM Report
This without a doubt the best dedication I have read so far,excellent .
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 30, 2007 03:11:41 PM Report
Noah,
 Wow ..you have written a deep felt poem   amazing how spiritual woman can be to others who really pay attention...  Wonderful poetry.. ~ She Whispers.

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on December 30, 2007 01:33:53 PM Report
I was going to say "and a happy new year to you too!".... until I read further down to the about section.

She was indeed brave. My age too.
To me the most poignant image was of her reapplying her lipstick minutes before she was murdered. To me, that spoke volumes.....
A strong one yes...a leader undoubtedly...but underneath it all a woman in a man's world.

Some women are just inspirational

she was one

Red x





 


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