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Author Name: Freejohncarter 11 Comments
Date Added: January 14, 2008 14:01:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She moves me

She moves me

 

She moves me in a way
Just like the constant sea
That ebbs and floes around my heart
For all eternity
 
She moves me like a shifting sand
I drift into her unseen hand
The place I long to safely land
I wait on her command
 
She moves me in the dark of night
And I dream of her
In restless thoughts, turning
Forever wanting yearning.

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
She knows
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Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on March 16, 2008 10:57:30 PM Report
how could she not know...this is just lovely and romantic...a lucky girl she is

~cin

Comment By: on February 10, 2008 02:18:30 PM Report

Really nice poem it is. It was something I could relate to.


Comment By: FreeDesiree on February 2, 2008 05:56:22 AM Report
Wow, this is BEAUTIFUL!

Comment By: PremiumJanet Gentry on January 19, 2008 02:31:39 PM Report
She sounds like a fascinatingly, mysteriously, ethereal human being!  You've painted a picture for the reader so pleasantly.  Very good.  Thanks for sharing this.

Janet 

 

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 16, 2008 12:50:36 PM Report
Beautiful John. Welcome back and yes I think she knows. This love poem says it all.

Helen

Comment By: PremiumGlata on January 15, 2008 02:05:59 PM Report
I'm certainly glad to see you back!!!! I've missed joking with you.  After reading this, any woman would know where they stood with you. It's beautiful, John.

Hugs!

Glata

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on January 15, 2008 05:38:00 AM Report
very romantic John, can't fail to move her.
Comment By: PremiumMahala Rose on January 14, 2008 10:40:56 PM Report
Really pretty poem. It reads easy and how much you care for her really shows. I especially like the first verse, it's such a powerful beginning.

Take care

~Mahalarose

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on January 14, 2008 09:10:31 PM Report
Your words ring true...you know exactly how yearning and wanting feel. These are such lovely thoughts John, I'm sure this moved her too. =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 14, 2008 02:30:43 PM Report
John,
Its great to see your poetry..... After reading this beautiful love poem for her........ I am sure...She knows...
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAdri on January 14, 2008 02:29:39 PM Report
Oh this is gorgeous.  Speak of love in the truest from. 
Beautiful!!!! 
Adri x





 


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