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Author Name: Freemidnight 2 Comments
Date Added: January 15, 2008 01:01:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She looks so pure
She looks so pure
Such a young girl
Hair so blonde and thin
I stand here watching her play
On the cliff
My love holding my close
I don't know who she is
The pure little girl
Hangs over the rope
She looks down at the water
So far below
Laughing, the air so nice
She falls to her death below
The white dress flows with her hair
As she is falling
My love and I
Fallow her to our death
Saying our last words
And farewells, on that long fall
Holding each other close
Leaving all the hurt and trouble
Last thoughts of love
As the water rushes over us
Then its Black
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It goes back to the girl
Just as she falls
Her falling to her death
I leave my love
And dive to my death
Instead of dieing
I fall into the water
Cold covering me
Light showing me the way
Out of the water
Finding the girl
Still alive and out of the water
Defieing out fall and alive
We grab each others hand
and walk away from
My love, and everything else we ever known
We go away from everything
Never to turn back
To defi our life
Author's Notes:
its a dream two parts differnt endings
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelface on May 21, 2009 07:46:33 AM Report
What a dream! I have wild dreams sometimes as this! Maybe its that you must be careful.. for the one you love maybe the one that will lead you away from the light if you not careful! Dreams can mean many differant dreams. However just pray and ask God to help you understand your dreams, and he will adventurally!

 

God Bless You,

Infinity

Comment By: FreeTwisted Logic on January 25, 2008 07:29:43 PM Report
Dreams are strange at the best of times...got yourself a real puzzler there tiff. Could get an aazing piece of work out of that if you ever figure it out. Hope you do.




 


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