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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: January 16, 2008 12:01:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Matrix
Times writes no wrinkles
inside the vanished heartbeat

Unconquered the pathless way to escape
through the clawing vines that snag
and the snarling whispering trees

Crippling rocks leave bloody stains
 I stumble through the lost shadows
in final desperation

Hushed are the dusty chocking winds
that strangle my lungs to breath

Detached gloom skies melt with dread
Dying leaves hear battlement terrors tears

Expiring groans responsive with hasty offering
laying among the dusky dirt paused with panic

Unknown was I
 this
vanished freedom shroud within
 but still my bloody lips failed

to send the fatal words

 Matrix
 It blinds you from the truth

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on January 28, 2008 01:01:12 PM Report
Magnificent you write hun

 

Love Angelxxx

Comment By: Freeabby on January 18, 2008 07:47:57 AM Report
Spellbinding, breathless lines
Comment By: FreeHerman Salazar, Jr. on January 17, 2008 01:14:15 PM Report

Your style of writing is mesmerizing.  It is very unique and you have an uncanny ability to get your points across with such vivid imagery.  Definitely one of a kind.  I do get a better picture of where your coming from when you write. 


Thanks for pointing this out to me & Have a great day,


Herman


Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on January 17, 2008 05:28:14 AM Report
It's an awesome poem. I just don know how to express how I felt after reading the poem. Wrtten so well. I like it very much......Take care
Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on January 16, 2008 02:48:50 PM Report
Powerful and so very riveting my friend...

Hugs and the light of hope! ~ Joe

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on January 16, 2008 01:07:40 PM Report
She:  Oh the Matrix spins and twists eternally.  Good write...

 

Lady D





 


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